This is the Final work of my Christmas break! Finished just in time for...well everything. Let me know what you guys think, I still have till Friday to get any revisions hashed out. Thanks!Oh. and the shot is a bit darker then the original...ill need to take it somewhere with better lighting then my apartment.
4 comments:
The Fish looks way way way better!
Fish looks great! Just love the rendering and the subdued orange. Anywhere i go in the illustration, I keep coming back to it and admiring the rendering on it.
Your composition is unconventional in the way the fish eye (the focus of the piece for me) is exactly on the bottom of the page. It works because of the tense dialogue between the fisherman and the fish. The piece is evenly divided into thirds though (the fish, the water/boat, clouds). Maybe darken some of the clouds and bring them all the way to the top, this would make them more omninous and help them fade into the background more (creating a better focus on what's happening). Just my two cents, either way works, it's a nice piece as it is.
all in all its working, i would just think about somehow adding some atmospheric prespective
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