Something for Design. I totally missed the point, but said fuck it and kept going. Anyways, I'd like to get some feedback on it. And you people are good at that.
EDIT- For some reasons Blogger wont let me comment, BUt.... Thanks for the crits guys. The strawberry power trails are gone, and I'm gonna define the vehicles a littler better
5 comments:
This is sexy!
The smoke trails aren't doing anything for me. I feel like they should look more gray? Or black? Unless they are powering their engines with strawberry energy. I like the sense of light you get from the sun, very bright. I wish the vehicles were bigger, that would give you more of a focus rather than having them fight the city for dominance. Though the search light on the top left car/jet/futurething in particular works well.
I agree with Hovey on the smoke trails. The current color seems a bit out of sorts. The design of the buildings is kick ass but i feel like the two largest are really lacking in inner detail. some indention of some kind. The last thing I saw is really getting nit picky. the motion blurs on the back of the vehicle closest to us are going at a different angle the the smoke trail implies.
That city scape is hot to death. I would tell you that that is the stenght of the piece and the cars seem a little distracting right now, i think they need to be more crisp and tightly rendered since they are so close to the picture plane
Crap.
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