I like this alot, but I think there is a little too much white of the eye to the left of the iris on the eye to our left. It make her looks like she's slightly crossed eyed. the other eye looks great.
I think I would like to see the shoulders feel just a tad wider. And a bit more movement to the hair. This is pretty sweet though. She has a nice look to her and the focus of the background is a nice tough.
Yeah I agree with the shoulders comment- I realized it when the piece was close to finished and I just wanted to have fun with it so I just left it as is rather then stressing over it.
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I like this alot, but I think there is a little too much white of the eye to the left of the iris on the eye to our left. It make her looks like she's slightly crossed eyed. the other eye looks great.
I think I would like to see the shoulders feel just a tad wider. And a bit more movement to the hair. This is pretty sweet though. She has a nice look to her and the focus of the background is a nice tough.
Yeah I agree with the shoulders comment- I realized it when the piece was close to finished and I just wanted to have fun with it so I just left it as is rather then stressing over it.
Thanks for the feedback!
I wanna see the hair more finished. and the eyes do look a bit wonky... hahahah =]
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