9.16.2009

Where the Red Fern Grows

I'm not sure if this is done. Let me know if anything should be corrected.

4 comments:

batennedy said...

get rid of the gradient on the text, its too subtle and looks kind of like a computer error. I think that you should make the yellow on the right dog a little darker just for some variation. Also, I think you should move the caption and make it its own separate block of text.

D.R. Hovey said...

At first I thought the dogs were kangaroos. If at all possible, I think thinning them out in the shoulders or stomach to help with the perspective would help establish their dogness. No, that isn't a word.

Bernadette said...

I think this looks nice. I think if you make some more variation in the red on the dogs it might help to emphasize the forshortening.

DENt said...

the perspective, coloring, and text use fuckin ROCKS!

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