I hate to fallow all these masterpieces with sketches but I am about to start a childrens book and I skcetched out the pages and wondering if they are working. If anyone has a spare second, I would really apreciat and input. The rest of the pages are here http://nathanwondrak.blogspot.com/.
I will end up going with a lighter line quality, take out the cat and fix some faces, but this is the main detection the boss wanted
This is the only page with multaple pictures on the same page, would that be ok?
There would also me more environments in most but I will watercolor these in a vignette like way. ThankI