Why isn't there any smoke coming out of the cigarettes, and the one in the mouth of the man on the left looks like it's sitting on Sue's ear.
I like this a lot actually. It does need the smoke comin off the cig though. My biggest problem is that the whole composition feels cramped, you could space out the characters a bit and hint at a barroom atmosphere. Something like that. Great font choice, just keep pushing it.
i agree with the previous comments, I really like the expressions but the ellipse on that mug is killing me!