Attn: Kevin

Here's my suggestion. It's just a scribble, but the band should definitely be facing away from the viewer, and you should definitely include lots of wires (and duct tape!) to really sell the idea that he's a roadie. Maybe you could even have a few steps going up to the stage, as opposed to just a flat plane as well. Putting him below the band would help make him look lower on the totem pole.

Good job thus far! Nice texture work.

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Kevin Havens said...

Thanks Jeff, this is pretty close to what my little prelim sketch has goin on. The band is up on like a second level and he's got beer bottles and instruments around him.

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