successive page roughs

hey all, been productive lately and I wanted to throw these pages up to get some input on them, i haven't included any dialogue so ill narrate. My story is apocalyptic in nature and touches on people who have a lot and people who have very little, which is why the soldiers are futuristic and the man wears street clothes. We have a soldier who got separated from her team mate running up a stair well in a dilapidated parking garage. She discovers she is too late to save her partner, she then notices the man in the dark and assumes he is the one who has hurt her partner.

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