Comic Page One (Banana-rama-bonanza)

A re-imagining of the classic tale of the genetically altered gorilla with Wilhelm Steinitz's brain being experimented on in some lab several miles below a Danish McDonalds. Things never seem to work out for that guy.

This is page one of a two-parter and I wanted to see if I could get any feedback. THANKS.

1 comment:

Jake Murray said...

Hey DAVE!!! Nice page you've got here. I must say I was surprised not to see noodley arms somewhere. :P As for crits, the only ones I would have is that the anatomy seems a little off in places (like the gorilla's right arm. Seems like there's not really any upper arm - just shoulder and forearm.) But I think you've definitely got the flow and pacing down pat, which I think are the most important aspects of comic art. Kudos!

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