I really like this. I don't think the ping lines need to go. They just need to be a bit cleaner and straighter. Is this digital or traditional?
nicely done, I really like the big character I wish the smaller one was a little more stylized though
Thanks guys. Its gouache i just did the practice lines in photoshop.
Don't know if I'm too late, but the lines on the left hand of the creature. Not really sure what side of the hand I'm seeing there or if that was intentional. I don't get the impressiont aht the thumb is to the inside of her hand. It looks like you tweaked it around in a stylized manner, but it may be useful to tone down that highlight on the thumb and bring forward the edge of the other side. So that it is more clear. Pretty freaky though. I'd run. Or poop myself and go blind. Either or.